Short Story Review: Mortal Veil by Vanessa Fewings

29069128Title: Mortal Veil (Stone Masters Vampire #2.5)

Author: Vanessa Fewings

Genre: Paranormal, Short Stories

Publication Date: January 1, 2011


About the Book

(from Goodreads)

With no recollection of the last three years of his life, Zach Harris finds himself stumbling back down the rabbit hole when his new friend Feebs takes him searching for answers. The only clues: a mysterious bank deposit of a half-million pounds and Zach’s branded-black tattoo of a raven. Their quest for the truth will lead them to the seediest parts of London, and Zach will have to face the unspeakable truth of a past better off forgotten.
A short story from V.M.K. Fewings’ beloved Stone Master’s series, “Mortal Veil” features familiar characters in the always-sexy Belshazzar’s night club, favorite hangout of England’s most wicked vampires. Fewings brings vampire fiction back to its Anne Rice roots with dark deeds and delicious monsters. Fans eagerly awaiting Fewings’ new release Dominon will love this return to the world of nightwalkers, and new readers will get their first taste of this thrilling series that gives vampires back the dangerous allure they’ve held on readers since Dracula first hit shelves.

Available on Amazon.


My Review

I received a free ecopy of this short story for an honest review.

I ran across this short story on my TBR list and didn’t understand why I hadn’t read it already since it’s only 26 pages. I figured out later that it’s book #2.5 in the Stone Masters Vampire Series. It actually stands on its own as a short story, though.

The main character, Zach, has lost the last 3 years of his life. He has no memory of where he’s been or what he was doing. His new friend, “Feebs,” decides to help him try to figure it out.

What they find is a shock (to them and me). This was a good short read. Now I’m definitely going to have to read the rest of this series!


About the Author

1507905Vanessa Fewings is the bestselling romance author of the highly acclaimed Enthrall Sessions.

Vanessa is also the author of The Stone Masters Vampire Series. Prior to publishing, Vanessa worked as a registered nurse and midwife. She holds a Masters Degree in Psychology. She has traveled extensively throughout the world and has lived in Germany, Hong Kong, and Cyprus.

Born and raised in England, Vanessa now proudly calls herself an American and resides in California with her husband.


Instagram: @vanessafewings

Book Review: Krim Du Shaw by Talia Haven


Krim was just a colt when the stallions of the Du Shaw herd led him and the mares to the stone building with its tall walls and heavy wooden door. The mares knew what the stallions yearned for, and they knew what would happen if the stallions gave in. But for Krim, it would be much later before he would discover for himself what lies beyond the stone wall.


My Review

I received a free ecopy of this short story for an honest review.

Talia Haven has done it again. She has a talent for writing short stories that evoke such strong feelings! I reviewed Mama Cried a while back and it was powerful. 

 Krim Du Shaw is a fable about how unicorns became nonexistent. It is such a sad story! This is not a short story I would recommend for children but it is a good, short read for adults.


Available on Amazon.


Book Review & Giveaway: The Warning by Sophie Hannah


Date Published: June 30, 2015
Publisher: HarperCollinsPublishers

Don’t say I didn’t warn you…

When a kindly stranger does Chloe a good deed, she decides she must repay him. But in tracing him, she meets a sympathetic woman named Nadine, who warns Chloe to stay away from the man at all costs. “Give him nothing, tell him nothing, don’t trust him,” she says. “Avoid him like the plague.”

Chloe knows the sensible thing to do: walk away. But her curiosity gets the best of her. What is the truth about the good Samaritan? How dangerous could he be? And can Chloe find the answers without putting herself and her daughter in harm’s way?

A twisting, razor-sharp suspense story that will keep you guessing to the very end, The Warning features an appearance from Simon Waterhouse, next seen in the full-length thriller Woman With a Secret – already hailed as “mesmerizing” (Lisa Gardner) and “unputdownable” (Liane Moriarty).


My Review

I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review.

The Warning is an interesting short story about Chloe, who is pretty pathetic. She is naive and so desperate to be loved that when Tom does something nice for her, and does a little sweet talking, she’s instantly obsessed.

After a coworker warned Choe to stay away from Tom, she doesn’t know what to do. What happens next totally surprised me.

I recommend this short story to anyone who likes a quick read full of suspense that will keep your interest.

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I haven’t chosen to have this conversation. Nadine Caspian followed me. Forced it on me.

She’s standing three steps above me on the staircase. It makes me feel trapped and small. I wish we could talk on the same level, but we can hardly stand side by side on one step—they’re too narrow.

I can’t decide if she’s attractive or not. Her hair is nice—dark blond, thick and subtly highlighted. Her face is heart shaped and her features big and doll-like, but with a slightly hardened look to them. She’s around my age: early thirties.

“Something tells me you haven’t known Tom Rigbey long,” she says. “You don’t know him well—am I right?”

I nod.

“This is none of my business, but I’ll say it anyway. You seem like a lovely person, so go and get your gift bag back off Rukia and give it to someone else, anyone else. Have nothing to do with Tom Rigbey. Give him nothing, tell him nothing, trust him not at all.’




About the Author

Sophie Hannah ap1Sophie Hannah is the New York Times bestselling author of nine psychological thrillers as well as The Monogram Murders, the first novel to be authorized by the estate of Agatha Christie. Her books have received numerous awards, including the UK National Book Award, and are published in twenty-seven countries. She lives in Cambridge, England.


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Twitter:  @sophiehannahCB1



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Short Story Review: Mama Cried by Talia Haven

24423468Title: Mama Cried

Author: Talia Haven

Genre: Short Story, Fantasy

Publication Date: January 9, 2015

About the Book

(from Goodreads)

Jenny was enjoying herself on the swings when Azula, one of the guardians of the playground came to take her away.
Together they journey to a cinder building where Jenny must make a powerful decision.


My Review

I received a free ecopy of this story for an honest review.

Mama Cried is one of the best short stories I have read. Even though it is short, it evoked powerful emotions.

Jenny, the main character, has a decision to make. Although I never found out exactly what her choices were, I could guess, and it doesn’t really matter because Jenny made the right choice in my opinion.

If you want a quick but powerful read, I definitely recommend Mama Cried.


Book Review: Big Fish by Ahmad Amani

21922318Title: Big Fish

Author: Ahmad Amani

Genre: Children

Publication Date: April 9, 2014

About the Book:

Big Fish had a big friend. They could speak and laugh together. In the sky, Big Fish could see anything on the earth, and it saw that its ocean was only a part of the earth, not all of the world.


My Review:

I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review.

I had read one other book, Math City, by Ahmad Amani that was difficult for me to get through but when he asked me to review Big Fish, which is for young children, I thought I would give it a try.

The drawings are simple and appear to be drawn by a child. My kindle isn’t color so I don’t know if they’re actually black and white or if there’s some color to them. They’re simple enough, though, that I don’t think color would make too much difference.

The story is different. Big Fish doesn’t have any friends in the ocean so he tries to change himself so he can make friends. That doesn’t work and he’s very lonely but he ends up making friends with the moon. As the moon gets smaller in size, Big Fish starts to cry. His tears are the source of Earth’s rain.

I don’t think young children would like this story. It ends on a sad note with Big Fish crying to make rain. It’s also confusing and doesn’t flow well. I don’t think it would keep a child’s attention.


About the author

4728475Ahmad lives in the Middle East. He is a graduate of the Art University in Tehran. He has worked for many newspapers in Iran as a journalist.
He hopes that his books make you think, while you enjoy it.

Book Review: Adventures with Ragweed by Linda Lou Crosby

RAGWEEDCOVERTitle: Adventures with Ragweed: A Collection of Whimsical Tales

Author: Linda Lou Crosby

Illustrator: Andy Atkins

Genre: Young Adult, Children, Humor, Short Stories

Date Published: February 10, 2014



About the Book

Whimsy – Humorous Tales of Adventure, Friendship and Outdoor Ventures For Young Adult Readers and those young at Heart

Adventures with Ragweed is a collection of humorous short stories filled with adventure and family themes.

Ragweed is a tribute to the whimsical part of each of us. Follow this young teen and her best friend, Marney as they travel to Mexico for a fishing trip, where the family is to shoot a pilot for a television show, instead, find themselves in an unexpected sea storm.

Laugh out loud as Ragweed takes on the tennis elite at the country club or attempts to rearrange their perfectly cut lawns.

Always one to learn new things, this young freckled face gal with the unruly blonde hair, builds a float, rides a horse and grows a garden – always getting into unintentional trouble and conning her friends to partake. Each task done with her own unique vies of the world.

Light Hearted and Funny

These stories are meant to entertain. It’s difficult to narrow it down to one specific genre as the book is a collection of short stories suitable for young adults as well as for an older crowd with a sense of humor. Family Relationships, Friendships, Essays and Humor are categories all presented within the pages of this book.

If you like the outdoors you might enjoy reading about Ragweed’s horse riding exploits or her compost-creating stunts. She spends a great deal of time playing sports and in the garden. Most of the stories are based on the author’s own experiences when she was a young adult but some of us know that inner youth tends to follow us into adulthood – so if you have similar backgrounds, these tales will make you grin.

Beautifully Illustrated

Each story in this humorous collection is beautifully illustrated. The pictures capture the character and facial expressions of the gals in these short stories and in our opinion add to the text. There is also an animated video on the author’s page that is worth watching. The artist tried to capture the fun-spirited character of Ragweed and when the pictures were put into film, the story came alive visually. It’s like a short cartoon.

Available on Amazon.


My Review

I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review.

Ragweed is a girl whose family is wealthy and she often finds herself bored, which is not usually a good thing. When she gets bored, she tends to find trouble. This book is a collection of short stories about Ragweed and her adventures from starting her own garden to getting into mischief at school with her only friend, Marney.

The stories are funny and the focus of each story is described well. For example, when Ragweed and her classmates build a float, the float is easy to visualize because of the detailed description.

Many of the characters are interesting. Ragweed, of course, is the most interesting and unique person in these stories. I like how she got her nickname. In fact, there are two reasons for her nickname. The one thing that surprised me was when I found out that Ragweed was a senior in high school. She seemed much younger by her actions and in the way she was described.

A couple examples of other interesting characters are Tex Loveland, a neighbor who is a retired rodeo clown. He saves the day for Ragweed a couple times. And Penelope, a girl who Ragweed plays tennis against.

I definitely recommend this book for children as well as young adults.


About the Author

LL mugLinda Lou Crosby is a video producer, storyteller and former professional athlete. Like Ragweed, she has a unique approach to life. Ragweed is a part of herself she wanted to share with others. Linda Lou has a great sense of humor and likes to laugh and make others laugh too.
She currently lives with her husband in Montana and California where on clear days you can find her fishing, hunting or hiking.
She and Ragweed hope you will enjoy each tale in this book as much as Ragweed enjoyed living the adventures.

Book Review: Math City by Ahmad Amani

10828018Title: Math City

Author: Ahmad Amani

Genre: Fantasy

Publication Date: May 5, 2012

About the Book:

Math City is a place where is into Math book, and also the pages of the book are the streets of Math City.

In this City, Monster Number was grossly overweight and had a shaggy body, like a mammoth. In the beginning, Monster Number could not walk very well. Though he swayed a little, tottering and often falling, my father trained him for detecting and killing. After a few days, we attacked Math City.

Math City was bombarded, the doors and the walls shaking while the dark shade of the Monster Number came down, covering the city. Monster Number threw big stones, one after another; and like a repulsive ghoul crashed through any barrier.

Then, after many horrible explosions, Monster Number entered the city, and we followed him. He smashed countless numbers as he put down his steps on the earth.

My Review:

I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review.

I understand that Ahmad Amani was using Math City to make the reader think and that it’s supposed to have social implications. The problem is that the story is difficult to follow and I was confused most of the time. I can’t relate a fantasy story to real life when I can’t follow the story. This is a book that might work well in college classes where they analyze fiction.

I don’t recommend this book unless you’re looking for something to analyze. I do support and greatly admire authors. I wouldn’t know where to begin to write a novel or even a short story. Just because this book is not one I would recommend, I applaud this author for the time, thought, and courage to not only write a book but to write something out of the ordinary that I’m sure others will find to their taste.


About the author

4728475Ahmad lives in the Middle East. He is a graduate of the Art University in Tehran. He has worked for many newspapers in Iran as a journalist.
He hopes that his books make you think, while you enjoy it.